Today’s guest post is by Tony Wanless of Knowpreneur consultants. Tony is a management consultant and journalist who writes for one of the top business sites and a national newspaper in Canada. He is often called upon by professional communicators to doctor marketing materials for modern media consumption. Tony has seen thousands of press releases tossed into trash baskets and is on a mission to help some escape that fate.
While there’s been much noise about the demise of the press recently, the truth is that there’s more media than ever around. The big difference is that the “press” has changed considerably over the last five years – it’s now gone electronic, has wider distribution than ever, and includes other media outlets like blogs, online news operations, Facebook and Twitter.
Today, the media’s need for information is insatiable, and as a result it’s never been easier for small businesses to achieve that Holy Grail of marketing – a mention in the media. However, with media proliferation also come higher speed and an avalanche of competition for attention.
But the bottom line is that you can get noticed by the media today if you know how to issue a press release that creates a compelling story.
To that end, here are some general tips to what used to be called “getting ink”.
- The “Why Should I Care” factor. Never “announce” anything in the old corporate press release style because, frankly, nobody cares. Apple may be able to “announce” something and be noticed because of its sheer weight and heft. But Acme won’t. Announcements are pompous and instant death for small, unknown, businesses. In this high-speed culture, you’re just not that important.
- The job of the people who receive press releases is to find interesting information that will arrest their readers or viewers for a few moments and draw them into reading on or continuing to view. They are your first and only target, so provide them with what they need to do their jobs. Don’t make it about you, but about the media outlet’s readers or viewers.
- Get to the point. You’ll have about 3-5 seconds to attract attention before receivers move on to the next release. So make your headline, subhead and lead-sentence show-stoppers that draw them into the next sentence or two and thus gain you a few more seconds. Borrow from blog writing methodology and make strong declarative benefit statements, or problem-solution equations, i.e. “How xxxxx can prevent yyyy,” or “Six ways to do xxxxx”.
- Write press releases like blogs. The Internet has trained everybody to read differently. Provide very useful and also somewhat entertaining information, and use a lot of boldfaced subheads so the media reader can get a sense of the story by skimming. One way to do this is not to write the press release in linear style, but initially concentrate on the story the subheads tell. Then you can infill with regular writing.
- Target, target, target the end media consumer. Most press releases try to speak to “everybody”, which doesn’t work today. The mass has been shattered into thousands of different subject matter shards. You have to hit the right emotional points of ONE group of people you purport to serve. Study your ideal customer profile and determine the problem points that will stir up emotions. The media receiver will also recognize them.
- Tell one story. Most amateur (and some professional) press release writers take a shotgun, or smorgasbord approach, trying to combine several storylines into one press release, i.e. “we’re doing this, AND we’re doing that, and we’re thinking of doing something else too. ” First of all, nobody cares what you’re doing. Second, telling two (or three or four) stories muddies up the waters and makes the media person work too hard to find a story. Unless you’re very important – and you’re not (See Point 1, Apple) – stick to one storyline.
- Think film and radio. Increasingly, media is visual and aural, as in television, YouTube and rip-and-read radio (that’s online and offline radio people who simply grab a press release, read out the juicy bits, and sometimes make a comment on it). See how you can make your story more visual with film or audio, and let the media outlet know that. If you don’t have great film, no television outlet will touch you. Increasingly, blogs and online media prize stories that also have some video attached, because they attract readers (and are tweetable or sharable on sites like Facebook).
Did you find Tony’s tips helpful? Got questions for Tony? Post them in the comments below, or please share your thoughts via Twitter or Facebook.
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Elena is founder of a technology PR agency that works with startups to billion-dollar companies. She is passionate about helping marketers and small business owners with practical publicity strategies.
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I agree that Press Releases are not dead. I have written about it in my blog. For very local papers I do find that you can “announce” and it is still news since they need to fill their pages each week.
Rob
What an excellent article Tony! Thanks for the refresher on the strategic do’s and dont’s of press releases. Good to know it’s still possible to achieve success with one.
I really enjoyed this article. A great reaffirmation of what I was feeling to be true. Our local media in Frederick, MD has a love hate relationship with releases and some of your suggestions could really liven it up.
Appreciate it!
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Hi Rob, Monica and Jennifer.
Glad you liked the article.
Rob, I agree, that some very small local papers will take any press release in order to fill their pages. But imagine how much more play you could get if you wrote a compelling story instead of a simple announcement. They’d probably give you the entire front page!
Monica: Nice to hear from you again. Yes. The press release is not dead, but it’s been ailing for some time. PR 2.0 techniques, in which you provide all the information needed by a writer — including the bad stuff — in a release optimized for internet connections — have injected some life back into them.
Jennifer: Media people are busier than ever today and very much appreciate when you actually highlight a story for them in the same way they look for one. It makes their job so much easier. They may not choose the first one you send, but they’ll remember you and you’ll get a longer look the next time.
Thanks for this post Tony! Great, practical tips – I’d love for you to guest post anytime!
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